While strumming on my guitar, loud in joy, yet silent in beat,
a single string is broken, the song of the wind becoming shattered and torn.
That song I wrote can no longer reach you, memories of that day I yearn to delete
A sacrifice for your happier melody in exchange for my heart forlorn.
Why does it still hurt? Like a russet tea stain burnt deep into a sweater gray...
Like a lone black hued sheep hidden within a throng of bright white fluff...
If I divide my sense of nostalgia into tiny paper airplanes, will you find it someday?
Or will you cover your ears and leave my reminiscence to dust, miniscule yet tough?
On the 11th, I wrote a letter to you, whispering to distant stars with words so sad.
A letter now in pieces carried by a breeze, a solemn tune never heard...too far.
Today, I will write another song for you, hao yan lei huai yan lei, with good tears and bad.
Only to wish for your friendship with good tears, to wipe traces of bad tears on my guitar.
In the end, if my song for you may fade away...if my longing will use the wind to flee,
I just hope, even when I can let go and I'm free...there will still be a good smile to flow in the wind...forever with me.
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Wow it's been a while since I last posted, sorry!
 Well as you can probably tell, this poem is the part 2/continuation of this poem I wrote last July, "Kaze no Uta: Song of the Wind." Last time, that poem was inspired by YUI's "Good-Bye Days" from Japanese movie, "Taiyou no Uta." However, this time this poem is inspired by Vivian Hsu's song "Good Tears Bad Tears" which is an insert song from the Taiwanese drama, "Corner with Love."  hope you like~ sorry about the grammar, length, etc. lol. |
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Haven't seen you on DA in a long time ^-^
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Aww, Thank you so much for the comment....and for the fave *A*
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You're welcome, you very much deserved ^-^
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"I've heard it said, that people come into our lives for a reason, bringing something we must learn. And we are led to those who help us most to grow, if we let them, and we help them in return."
~Glinda (Wicked)
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~Glinda (Wicked)
This is so good, it puts my poetry to shame
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Aww, thank you so much!
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From tomorrow
It's Sunday, Monday and Tuesday once again
See, when you turn around it's Wednesday and Thursday
Then Friday, Saturday and Sunday
We'll make sure
To enjoy each day to it's fullest
Now let's go!
~NewS "weeeek" (translated lyrics)
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