Yesterday, in my eyes...all I could see...
was someone else, that person was all my heart knew.
I never realized how important you were to me,
until...I woke up and all I could think of was you.
Today, I'm singing a brand new song,
a happier melody that I hope you can hear.
More than words that prance along,
I want to thank you...for wiping "a fool's only tear."
I'll entrust my message to that window in my room...
to summer's faint whisper, distant among the heat,
to the wind, blowing cherry blossoms late in bloom,
strumming on my guitar, loud in joy, yet silent in beat.
I will keep humming the same tune, the song in the wind,
waiting until my song reaches you, from beginning to end.
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wow it's been so long since i've last submitted something!
 and it's been even longer since i've written poetry! so i guess you can tell i need ALOT of brushing up to do, as far as my english vocabulary, grammar, and such. (plus it's summer, so laziness is common right? lol)  so honto ni gomen nasai.inspired by watching the jmovie, "Taiyou no Uta," starring Yui, by her song called "good-bye days," and to put it simply...the world around me. hope you like it.  |
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Better than most of the stuff I've written >.>;;
Good job
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"I went to sleep a poet, and I woke up a fraud"
"I can write it better than you ever felt it"
"These words are all I have, so I'll write them"
-- Fall Out Boy
i REALLY like this line. ♥
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life's tough. grab a snickers.
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Ka ching! [:
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From tomorrow
It's Sunday, Monday and Tuesday once again
See, when you turn around it's Wednesday and Thursday
Then Friday, Saturday and Sunday
We'll make sure
To enjoy each day to it's fullest
Now let's go!
~NewS "weeeek" (translated lyrics)
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From tomorrow
It's Sunday, Monday and Tuesday once again
See, when you turn around it's Wednesday and Thursday
Then Friday, Saturday and Sunday
We'll make sure
To enjoy each day to it's fullest
Now let's go!
~NewS "weeeek" (translated lyrics)
arigatou for the comment!
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From tomorrow
It's Sunday, Monday and Tuesday once again
See, when you turn around it's Wednesday and Thursday
Then Friday, Saturday and Sunday
We'll make sure
To enjoy each day to it's fullest
Now let's go!
~NewS "weeeek" (translated lyrics)
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Ka ching! [:
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「僕は 僕は 知りたい愛するってどんな事？」
~kuroganexfai
Arigatou!!
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From tomorrow
It's Sunday, Monday and Tuesday once again
See, when you turn around it's Wednesday and Thursday
Then Friday, Saturday and Sunday
We'll make sure
To enjoy each day to it's fullest
Now let's go!
~NewS "weeeek" (translated lyrics)
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